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PostSubject: World Collison   Sat Jan 10, 2015 8:39 pm

I know it isn't a game and all, but I've been working on a story over the past months. It isn't long, but I'm continuing it. I take video games or TV shows and add my own characters into it. I think it's unique and I hope you guys get interested in this. Here's the first story. I'll be posting up them as I finish them and check for errors. Give me some ideas for the next one I'll be making.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/177_TzRpDnOJD5M5I6TX03bER5x0VmuIX2TkJQh9N3Lw/edit?usp=sharing
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Tue Jan 13, 2015 1:16 pm

Pretty good, pretty good...
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:08 pm

Basically I created a whole group of people that tie into the plot. I won't get into the details, but I CAN say that the second "Descendant" is a familiar green ball (you know who I mean) from Cut the Rope.
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:38 pm

Why were there so many Kung-Fu Panda references in the beginning?
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:39 pm

Well it's...uhh...interesting...
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:52 pm

Elven_Lord wrote:
Well it's...uhh...interesting...
The reason for the references is because Kai lives directly where the events of Kung Fu Panda takes place. I'm new to the whole story writing thing so it may not be to good. I just hope the way i make my stories is original.
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Tue Jan 13, 2015 8:57 pm

Elven_Lord wrote:
Well it's...uhh...interesting...
You don't need to pause so much like that. If I'm going to make the story that's appealing to most (and you) then I'm going to need you to be more direct.
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Thu Jan 15, 2015 4:34 pm

It's, uh, interesting. Very interesting. How did you come up with the ideas? And it is appealing! It's good! I just couldn't explain it any other way. It's a great interesting!
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Fri Jan 16, 2015 2:06 am

Elven_Lord wrote:
It's, uh, interesting. Very interesting. How did you come up with the ideas? And it is appealing! It's good! I just couldn't explain it any other way. It's a great interesting!
The ideas? Well I had a journal where I keep my various dreams and thoughts in. A whole section was dedicated to these people I liked to call Descendents.
The time traveling to worlds thing? You can thank my sheer nerdness of Kingdom Hearts for that. But they can only time travel backwards (maybe thats why they popped up there). Kingdom Hearts is also the reason why there are original characters from shows you already know about.
Each Descendent has a Keyblade, and another weapon they use.
Kai has two battle axes, Aiden uses his fists.
And sometimes I say things like "interesting" when I cant really explain it either. I guess it makes my mind a bit more open? I have no idea really.
Better get started on the second story.
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Fri Jan 16, 2015 6:39 am

Hm. It's nice. And I don't blame you. I have KH for PS2, and it's fun!
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PostSubject: Re: World Collison   Mon Feb 02, 2015 12:11 am

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1nHgpNK9HRD2lOT8u5_3zyWWn_sB65VrlOz9mWM27TjE/pub

The second story is finally done. I think you might remember these guys from somewhere!
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